我给你修改的英文也自然一点啊。没有一个字一个字翻译,但是本来有的意思现在还是都有的。
good
morning/afternoon,
my
name
is
x
and
i
am
turning/i
turned
(看你生日几号)
twenty-two
this
year.
i
graduated
from
x
university
with
a
degree
in
electronic
commerce
in
2008.
having
been
working
in
customer
service
since
graduation,
i
am
experienced
in
the
field
which
will
help
me
in
becoming
an
excellent
(你要申请的职业).
i
possess
excellent
computer
skills,
including
microsoft
office.
i'm
enthusiastic,
responsible
and
amicable
and,
if
hired,
i
am
confident
i
will
blend
into
the
team
at
(公司/部门名字)very
quickly.
thank
you.
(我也不清楚自我介绍之后他们还会不会和你聊天下去,如果不会的话可以说thank
you
and
have
a
good
day,比较地道)