我和我的朋友们游泳用friends吧。但是我的朋友们游得比我快改成but my friends swim faster than me,第三人称复数后面的动词就不要加s了。
My favorite season is summer.Because it's hot and sunny. I can eat ice-cream after school . I can go swimming with my friends,but my friends swim faster than me.I can go rowing and fishing. In summer,it's often rainy.The days get longer and the nights get shorter.Which favourite season do you like?
favourite是favorite
swims改成swim