您好!该句错误在于,对lend的用法不清楚。具体可以是如下两种改法:
Would you like to lend me some money to buy some books?
或者:Would you like to lend some money to me to buy books?
也就是:lend sb. sth或 lend sth.to sb. 借给某人某物.
谢谢!希望能帮助您!
把 for 改为 to
lend ... to 借。。。给。。。
would you like to lend me some money to me to buy books?