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Dear Sir or Madam,
I think that middle school students have too
much pressure from school.And I agree that there is no need for them to
get so much homework to do.And I think it is unfair for children to
stay up doing their homework late .In addition,I think children should
have the enough rights to study and relax because only in this way can
make them live happily without any pressure.But they should also pay
some attention to spending the time on schoolwork in order to keep their
grades at a good level.For example, they should do some homework first
and after finishing,they can relax for couple of hours and then continue
their homework.Because the more homework they have to do,the more
pressure they will have,so it is beneficial for them to relax a
little.And these are my suggestions.
Yours truly,Mike
亲爱的先生或女士,
我
认为中学学生从学校的压力太大了.我认为,他们不需要太多的作业要做.我认为孩子们熬夜做作业是不公平的.另外,我认为孩子应该和放松,因为只有这样才能
让他们没有任何压力,生活快乐学习足够的权利.但是他们也应该注意花时间学习以保持他们的成绩在良好水平.例如,他们应该做一些功课首先完成后,他们可以
放松几个小时,然后继续他们的作业.因为他们必须做更多的功课,他们将有更多的压力,所以这对他们是有益的放松了一点.这是我的建议.
你真诚的,麦克