第1段，第1行：that后缺动词，建议改成 ... that there is a flame with smile ... ；去掉And，there is 改成 There is also ... ；word 改成 phrase ；第2行：... flame that ... 改成 ... flame says that ... ；第3行：warm 改成名词 warmth ；who 引导的从句挪到 people 后面。
第2段，第3行：I have given the money 改成 I once gave money ；第4行：need help to eat 改成 needed food ；第5行：may have starved 改成 might had been starved ；for 改成 at 。
第3段，第2行：If we 改成 To 即可；第3行：harmony是名词，这里改成形容词 harmonious ；who needs 改成 in need 。
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